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arya ride
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PostPosted: Tue Oct 25, 2005 2:50 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

yay yay yay!!! w00t! you survi-ived, you survi-ived, you survi-ived! i ish sooo happys!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy
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PostPosted: Fri Oct 28, 2005 12:32 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

alright! Very Happy kairi lived! kairi lived!






more story
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PostPosted: Fri Oct 28, 2005 4:45 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

November 10 is my eye surgery Very Happy

I will write more tonight or later
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PostPosted: Fri Oct 28, 2005 6:53 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

yipee!!!
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PostPosted: Sat Oct 29, 2005 9:04 pm    Post subject: Chapter 5 Reply with quote

I walk out after getting cleaned up and dressed. He just stares at me. His eyes seemed like where amazed. I give him a small smile. He comes up close whispering in my ear.

"im.... sorry about that..... risk i took" He whispered in my ear
"I was already dead"
"........ the venom would have made you never come back...."

I put a finger over his lips then i turn his head and i give him a small kiss. I walk into the living room and i sit down on the couch then i close my eyes. I hear some noises then i open my eyes and there is a figure standing over me then he puts his hand over my mouth as I try to scream then i feel a sharp pain in my neck i Pass out.

~~~~~Jason POV~~~~~
After Eve kissed me I went to my room and i fell sleep. Arima came running in yelling my name.

"whats happening Arima?" i mumble half asleep
"Eve is gone......"
"no...." I feel my eyes go wide as i jerk awake.
"shes.... been kidnapped..... and hurt.... these blood...."

I run out and there James sit at the table with his head in his arms. i look over by the couch and blood is on the ground. I see some making of a Vampire and the sent of My other brothers sent hung in the air.

To Be continued in Part 2
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PostPosted: Sat Oct 29, 2005 9:14 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

good story kairi good luck on da eye surgury

i had a surgury and i almost died
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PostPosted: Sat Oct 29, 2005 11:37 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

dovegirl wrote:
good story kairi good luck on da eye surgury

i had a surgury and i almost died

Oh now thats really nice to say to a girl whos already scared about the surgery
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arya ride
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PostPosted: Sun Oct 30, 2005 6:51 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

well i had surgery and didn't almost die Very Happy
you'll be fine KK...you'd better be or else we won't get any more FF. hehe

great chapter!
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PostPosted: Sun Oct 30, 2005 10:49 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

heh....
That is part 1 and i will start trying to write part 2 soon
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 31, 2005 6:22 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

yipee!!!
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 31, 2005 6:23 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

yipee!!!
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PostPosted: Tue Nov 01, 2005 7:49 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

sry kairi i almost died from the tennis ball sized toumor in my side not the surgury Confused they got it out and i have a 4inch scar on my belly
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PostPosted: Tue Nov 01, 2005 8:25 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

i'm new here, and i love ur story! please keep it up
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PostPosted: Tue Nov 01, 2005 8:45 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

dovegirl wrote:
sry kairi i almost died from the tennis ball sized toumor in my side not the surgury Confused they got it out and i have a 4inch scar on my belly
Toumor?.... how old are you?
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PostPosted: Wed Nov 02, 2005 7:54 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

scooter424 wrote:
i'm new here, and i love ur story! please keep it up
Welcome! hope you will read the first part ^_^ i will update tonight or tommorrow, im having eye surgery next week to.... I WILL UPDATE SOON PPL!
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