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arya ride Tested & Nested
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Posted: Tue Oct 25, 2005 2:50 pm Post subject: |
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yay yay yay!!! w00t! you survi-ived, you survi-ived, you survi-ived! i ish sooo happys!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! _________________ "In the beginning the Universe was created. This has made a lot of people very angry and been widely regarded as a bad move"-Douglas Adams
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dovegirl Tested & Nested
Joined: 06 May 2005 Posts: 684 Location: alaska
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Posted: Fri Oct 28, 2005 12:32 am Post subject: |
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alright! kairi lived! kairi lived!
more story _________________ If you can look in my eyes,
and tell me it'll be all right,
if you promise never to leave,
you just might make me believe.
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Kid Kairi Tested & Nested
Joined: 22 May 2005 Posts: 949 Location: In the darkness searching for my soul.
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Posted: Fri Oct 28, 2005 4:45 pm Post subject: |
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November 10 is my eye surgery
I will write more tonight or later |
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arya ride Tested & Nested
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Posted: Fri Oct 28, 2005 6:53 pm Post subject: |
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yipee!!! _________________ "In the beginning the Universe was created. This has made a lot of people very angry and been widely regarded as a bad move"-Douglas Adams
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Kid Kairi Tested & Nested
Joined: 22 May 2005 Posts: 949 Location: In the darkness searching for my soul.
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Posted: Sat Oct 29, 2005 9:04 pm Post subject: Chapter 5 |
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I walk out after getting cleaned up and dressed. He just stares at me. His eyes seemed like where amazed. I give him a small smile. He comes up close whispering in my ear.
"im.... sorry about that..... risk i took" He whispered in my ear
"I was already dead"
"........ the venom would have made you never come back...."
I put a finger over his lips then i turn his head and i give him a small kiss. I walk into the living room and i sit down on the couch then i close my eyes. I hear some noises then i open my eyes and there is a figure standing over me then he puts his hand over my mouth as I try to scream then i feel a sharp pain in my neck i Pass out.
~~~~~Jason POV~~~~~
After Eve kissed me I went to my room and i fell sleep. Arima came running in yelling my name.
"whats happening Arima?" i mumble half asleep
"Eve is gone......"
"no...." I feel my eyes go wide as i jerk awake.
"shes.... been kidnapped..... and hurt.... these blood...."
I run out and there James sit at the table with his head in his arms. i look over by the couch and blood is on the ground. I see some making of a Vampire and the sent of My other brothers sent hung in the air.
To Be continued in Part 2 |
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dovegirl Tested & Nested
Joined: 06 May 2005 Posts: 684 Location: alaska
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Posted: Sat Oct 29, 2005 9:14 pm Post subject: |
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good story kairi good luck on da eye surgury
i had a surgury and i almost died _________________ If you can look in my eyes,
and tell me it'll be all right,
if you promise never to leave,
you just might make me believe.
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Kid Kairi Tested & Nested
Joined: 22 May 2005 Posts: 949 Location: In the darkness searching for my soul.
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Posted: Sat Oct 29, 2005 11:37 pm Post subject: |
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dovegirl wrote: | good story kairi good luck on da eye surgury
i had a surgury and i almost died |
Oh now thats really nice to say to a girl whos already scared about the surgery |
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arya ride Tested & Nested
Joined: 12 Jul 2005 Posts: 1180
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Posted: Sun Oct 30, 2005 6:51 pm Post subject: |
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well i had surgery and didn't almost die
you'll be fine KK...you'd better be or else we won't get any more FF. hehe
great chapter! _________________ "In the beginning the Universe was created. This has made a lot of people very angry and been widely regarded as a bad move"-Douglas Adams
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Kid Kairi Tested & Nested
Joined: 22 May 2005 Posts: 949 Location: In the darkness searching for my soul.
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Posted: Sun Oct 30, 2005 10:49 pm Post subject: |
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heh....
That is part 1 and i will start trying to write part 2 soon |
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arya ride Tested & Nested
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Posted: Mon Oct 31, 2005 6:22 pm Post subject: |
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yipee!!! _________________ "In the beginning the Universe was created. This has made a lot of people very angry and been widely regarded as a bad move"-Douglas Adams
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arya ride Tested & Nested
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Posted: Mon Oct 31, 2005 6:23 pm Post subject: |
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yipee!!! _________________ "In the beginning the Universe was created. This has made a lot of people very angry and been widely regarded as a bad move"-Douglas Adams
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dovegirl Tested & Nested
Joined: 06 May 2005 Posts: 684 Location: alaska
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Posted: Tue Nov 01, 2005 7:49 pm Post subject: |
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sry kairi i almost died from the tennis ball sized toumor in my side not the surgury they got it out and i have a 4inch scar on my belly _________________ If you can look in my eyes,
and tell me it'll be all right,
if you promise never to leave,
you just might make me believe.
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scooter424 Leader of a Flock
Joined: 01 Nov 2005 Posts: 308 Location: my world....who knows where that is
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Posted: Tue Nov 01, 2005 8:25 pm Post subject: |
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i'm new here, and i love ur story! please keep it up _________________ Life's too short to waste!
I smile because i have no idea what's going on!
I've seen a lot of people who've gotten hit with an ugly stick, but MAN! you must have been beaten with it! |
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Kid Kairi Tested & Nested
Joined: 22 May 2005 Posts: 949 Location: In the darkness searching for my soul.
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Posted: Tue Nov 01, 2005 8:45 pm Post subject: |
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dovegirl wrote: | sry kairi i almost died from the tennis ball sized toumor in my side not the surgury they got it out and i have a 4inch scar on my belly | Toumor?.... how old are you? |
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Kid Kairi Tested & Nested
Joined: 22 May 2005 Posts: 949 Location: In the darkness searching for my soul.
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Posted: Wed Nov 02, 2005 7:54 pm Post subject: |
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scooter424 wrote: | i'm new here, and i love ur story! please keep it up | Welcome! hope you will read the first part ^_^ i will update tonight or tommorrow, im having eye surgery next week to.... I WILL UPDATE SOON PPL! |
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