For the Love of Sentences | | Russell Crowe as Roger Ailes in the Showtime miniseries “The Loudest Voice.” JoJo Whilden/Showtime | | Readers bring less patience to newspaper articles than they do to books, so the sentences near the beginning are arguably the most important. And as Bonnie Bailey of Birmingham, Ala., pointed out, there are terrific ones at the start of James Poniewozik’s review of the Showtime miniseries “The Loudest Voice,” about Roger Ailes and Fox News. James notes that Ailes begins narrating his own story “as he lies dead on the floor. I mean, why wouldn’t he?” | “He built a noise machine, Fox News, that amplified conservatism and then devoured it,” James goes on to write. “Even after he was forced out at Fox for sexual harassment, his worldview continued to blare from it. What, you thought a little thing like dying would shut Roger Ailes up?” Read the whole review, though. It’s a gem from opening to close. | The same goes for the recent appraisal of TAK Room by The Times’s chief restaurant critic, Pete Wells. Judith Klinger of Manhattan urged a special citation of it, and I’m glad she did. She spotlighted a sentence about the restaurant’s location in a deluxe city-within-the-city that has drawn much derision. “Parts of Hudson Yards are still under construction, but enough has been finished for most New Yorkers to figure out that this fistful of glass needles stabbed into the West Side wasn’t built for them,” Pete snipes. Gaping at the prices on the TAK Room menu, he reports that the bargains are eggplant Parmesan for $30 and New Zealand salmon for $42. “After that, please turn off all electronic devices and place your tray tables in the upright, locked position, because we are going up to $66 and $75 before reaching a cruising altitude of $85,” Pete jokes. “Look down there — don’t the people look just like ants?” | While we’re on the subject of food (and drink), I want to recommend Bobby Finger’s recent exploration of what separates “cold brew,” whose decadent taste reflects time-consuming preparation, from plain old iced coffee. “If you’re unfamiliar with the difference,” he explains, “think of cold brew as traditional iced coffee’s unhurried fraternal twin. Cold brew can’t go a day without a long, luxurious bath, while iced coffee can barely swing a quick shower; cold brew has read ‘The Goldfinch’ (and is planning on a reread before the movie is released later this summer), but iced coffee unfortunately never had the time — what with work and the kids — though it has seen the trailer on mute.” | Richard Bitner of Lancaster County, Pa., praised David Khalaf’s deeply moving “Modern Love” essay about his family’s decision that he should protect his grandmother from the knowledge that he’s married to another man. “I rang the doorbell of my grandmother’s house before remembering to pull off my wedding ring,” the essay begins. “I slipped it into my pocket and, just like that, I was someone else — an actor playing a fictional version of me.” | In the specific passage that Bitner singled out, Khalaf reflects on the awkwardness of being asked by his grandmother if he’s living with anyone. “What could I tell her?” David wonders. “Yes, Nana, I am living with the love of my life, a man who chipped away my walls, brick by brick, until he could see me inside. When the hole was large enough for me to fit through, he held out his hand and I took it and walked into the world, exposed. This man who rescued me from my own facade, the one I am forced to reconstruct for your benefit.” | Both Alexander Henke of Madrid and James Turner of Hampton, Va., cited the Peter Baker paragraph that I reproduced in the second item of this newsletter. | Now for two more shout-outs from me. In an excellent Opinion section contribution from Costica Bradatan about the difficulty of sustaining a democracy, this part struck me as especially eloquent and vivid and true: “Genuine democracy doesn’t make grand promises, does not seduce or charm, but only aspires to a certain measure of human dignity. It is not erotic. Compared to what happens in populist regimes, it is a frigid affair. Who in his right mind would choose the dull responsibilities of democracy over the instant gratification a demagogue will provide? Frigidity over boundless ecstasy? And yet, despite all this, the democratic idea has come close to embodiment a few times in history — moments of grace when humanity almost managed to surprise itself.” | Finally, I draw attention to the first sentence of Somini Sengupta’s dispatch from Chennai, India, about its dire water shortage because her words demonstrate that outstanding writing isn’t necessarily about acrobatic syntax, inventive vocabulary, wicked wit or anything as showy as that. Sometimes it’s about spare, sensibly chosen detail. “When the water’s gone, you bathe in what drips out of the air-conditioner,” Somini writes. And just like that, Chennai’s awful predicament comes fully alive. | | |