CRASH! (sequal to WINGZ!)

GuidingWingz8857 · Posted: Wed Dec 21, 2005 5:51 pm Post subject:

i am kinda doing both as i read and type in rps.. >_>" i come up with ideas to type and go on with the story.. that and daydreaming is where i pluck my ideas.
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hawkeyes1 · Posted: Wed Dec 21, 2005 5:52 pm Post subject:

ditto that...me too
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countryangel · Posted: Mon Dec 26, 2005 11:59 pm Post subject:

we never got that two chappy christmas present Sad

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GuidingWingz8857 · Posted: Thu Dec 29, 2005 1:01 am Post subject:

I know i know.. srry.. its just... late... -_-" Gimme a day two days tops ull get them trust me!!
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hawkeyes1 · Posted: Thu Dec 29, 2005 9:53 am Post subject:

*grins* will watch for that... Very Happy

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GuidingWingz8857 · Posted: Thu Dec 29, 2005 1:26 pm Post subject:

*releived sigh* Thanks for giving me more time.. i honestly thought it would be up by now.. STUPID DISTRACTIONS! almost done i swear!
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countryangel · Posted: Thu Dec 29, 2005 2:30 pm Post subject:

that's okay, i've been buisy too, while the holidays were going on
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hawkeyes1 · Posted: Thu Dec 29, 2005 5:49 pm Post subject:

lol im still busy!!! my dads bday is tmrw and my grandmas is on new years eve...got serious present wrapping to do.lol Laughing

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GuidingWingz8857 · Posted: Fri Dec 30, 2005 2:07 pm Post subject:

thanks for being patient!!!!

CHAPTER 7!!!

I felt bad haveing to leave Soara behind but Mom promised that we would go back to get her. And i never remember one time where mom had ever lied. I also never remembering mom to use that power of hers. Later that Day after we landed And went into Max's house, she told me of her two powers. I also found out that Dad had them too, and i was glad that the twins didnt have them. I looked at Edan who just stood there and looked at the wall. I blushed and turned until the red went away. I looked around, tiredly and let out a sigh. "I got your luggage from the airport. Go and take a shower and then get some rest." My mom said putting her hand on my shoulder. I nodded and went upstairs to find my Luggage bag already in the bathroom. I took my shower and got dressed in pajama pants and a no sleeve shirt. And stepped out and gasped seeing Fang's face right there. "Im sorry you just scared me is all.." I said and he just gave a slight smile and nod then walked past me and shut the door to the bathroom. Stupid me.. I thought and walked downstairs. The couch was all ready for me to sleep on and it wasnt that hard to fall asleep. I woke up and rubbed my eyes looking around. I heard something outside the house. My eyes jerked open at the sound of a fight, slight screams and groans. I ran to the front door, my wings flared a little. I opened it and there was a battle field before me. My mother was holding na Eraser's wrist as they were holding hers in a nonmoving stance. It was hard to tell who was wining that one. Edan had set one ablaze and it ran around screaming in pain. Max and fang were teaming up and every so often would switch Erasers to bring them down. "Oh crap.." I muttered and shut the door. only to be grabbed by behind. "Its me!" The voice said quickly and i knew it was Angel. "This way.." She said letting go but grabbed my wrist and pulled me up the stairs. "They want you. They found you easily." She said jogging up the stairs. "You mom told me to get you outta here. Your instincts should tell you how to get back to your own home ok? She trusts you." Angel said leading me into a secret patht hat led to the attic. And she pushed open a door that no one would normally see there. "Go!" She yelled and heard the fron door burst open. "They will be here in a minute! GO!" She yelled and pushed me. My wings caught the air and i took flight. I turned to look back adn i saw Angel fighting two Erasers. one had a gun and i saw a red light on me. "Oh Crap!" I yelled and picked up speed and moved. I heard the gun shoot but i felt nothing. I sighed thannkfully and got away from there as soon as i could. I hoped my mom was alright. And if it wasnt one way it was another that we were seperated. I flew off at an incredible speed.. well to me it was an incredible speed. Actaully flying period was utterly speachless. Anyway, i looked down and cringed as i passed the House. I tried not to stare at it or in its direction but i failed in that too. I saw someone in the window looking up and teary eyed. Her face red and bruised. "Soara.." I whispered as a muttered and appologize as i flew by. I kept flying the blood bath that had stood in front of me still hounted me every time i closed my eyes. The dead ERasers numbers were piling up high. I wondered if Angel was ok.. If mom and Edan was ok.. Max and Fang too.. I didnt know when but i had started to cry. I was looseing my balance and dwindled in flight. I wiped my eyes and looked up. I put on a strong front. "Not landing here or anywhere near here." I said angrilly and strongly to myself. I watched the ground and i didnt see any Erasers or anything that even lookd like it was going to take me back there to that.......place. the scenery changed as i went farther and farther away. And it made me sadder and sadder. The only and first time that i can reconnect with mom and i have to fly away and let her save me. Its depressing. I saw a campground and a few binoculars. A few kids pointing in awe at Seeing someone with wings flying. I would much rather them see the two of us, mom and me.. Although i would love to go for a flight with Edan. I sighed and became tired i saw a random open tree in the forest and landed. I grabbed the locket and opened it and looked at the picture of Edan on one side. nad my family on the other. My parents and Edan both pitched in to buy it for me oon my sweet sixteen birthday. I never took it off since i got it. I sighed and closed it. Pressing my back against the tree i fell asleep. I had a dream. They had captured me and i was on my way back to the House. I woke up in a fright but saw a few flashlightsgoing from one direction to the other. Coming closer and closer to me and the branch i was on. I crouched close to the tree and closed my eyes. "Dont see me please dont see me." I whispered. The lights may have come close but they never shone on me. I let out a relieved sigh and clutched the locket on the chain. I kinda did that at times.. I dont know why but i do. Seeing the lights go away i watched the distance for them to return. They never came back. I sighed again and fell asleep right where i sat.
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GuidingWingz8857 · Posted: Fri Dec 30, 2005 2:08 pm Post subject:

And here is the other part.... srry it may be short...

CHAPTER 8!!!!!!
I woke up and started to fly away. A.S.A.P. Soome the forests turned to buildings and the places seemed to be more like home. I knew where i was and where i was heading. Ahead of me i saw 3 figures high in the air. Too large for birds and too small to be mechanical things. I knew what and who they where. hovering above our house. "DAD!!! AL!! RINA!!" I cried and flew even faster. I grabbed my dad in a hug and it whirled us around a little. He looked at me. "So.. Your mother tells me that you got your wings. I see she wasnt lying." He said. "Well Hello! How else do you explain that i just had the GREATEST TRIP OF MY LIFE?!" I cried at him. "Greatest?" He asked. "It wasnt being taken to that place.. or being sucked out of the plane..I meant flying." I told him not looking him in the eyes. "I know." He said with a goofy smiled and then he messed up my hair. "Dad!" I said and tried to straighten it. Al had jumped on my back. "Jalen Jalen!" He said. "What Al?" I asked. "Now you wont get as mad when we say that we have wings." He said happily."Nope! Just a bunch of experiments..A weird winged family." I told him. "Yea.." Rina said with a pout. I could tell that she will miss the power that she used to have over me. "Yea.." I said softly."Where's your mom?" Dad asked. "I dont know. Probably still back there. They still want me." I said looking at the ground. "We should land and talk about this.." I said and flew down to the roof with Al still on my back. "Your mom told me some of the story but not all of it. Why are they still after you?" My father asked landing in front of me. "They.. i mean He wants me to be the first flying eraser." I said looking to the ground. "I dont know why though. Thye want me to kill you guys.. and i dont know." I said giving up on giving an explanation. My father hugged me. "Its ok... we wont let them take you." He said. "I know that.." I whispered and suddenly remembered the bloodbath that i had seen going on in Max's front yard. "Mom! What the hell am i doing?! Im so stupid.. We need to go back and help her!" I sadi and broke free from my father's hug and ran to the edge of the rooftop. "Your not going anywhere. Wi]I mean your mother can take care of herself. Her powers.. well one of them is to go through things.. they cant touch her or keep her." Dad said. "I dont ever remembering her using that power." I told him. "Sure you do! Remember that bad accident and this family was the only one to come out of it unscratched?" I nodded. "That was your mother's doing." He said. "I never knew that." I said. Then sighed and nodded reluctantly. "Ok.. ill let her handle it." I said. "Good now come inside." He said and jumped off of the roof to fly to our own house roof. We landed about 5 minutes later and he opened the door for us to go inside. I broke away to get cleaned up and changed into new clothes and went to the kitchen where everyone was gathered. I sighed and sat down. The phone rang and dad rushed to go get it. He came back a few minutes later to where Rina Al and I were waiting. "That was Max.. Your mother.. well she was hurt pretty badly and is staying there for awhile." He said when he returned. "How badly.. what happened? U LIED TO ME! U SAID THEY COULDNT TOUCH HER!!" I yelled. "Jalen please.."He said softly. "Just relax.. Eraser's play dirty tricks.. sometimes you mom cant see them ahead of time." He said not looking at me. I looked away. "Im going for a flight. I'll be back.. whenever." I told him and ran out of the house spread my wings and took off. I was heading back to mom and that place. I dont think i can stay in one place for too long.. and at a time like this i need to be with my mom... At least im stupid enough to think this. Dad can handle the other two for now. I flew fast. Pretty fast for a first time flyer.. well third time flyer. I saw the place. The House. But this time i didnt see Soara in the window. I shuddered and flew a little faster. That is untill i felt something wrap around me like a net. "Oh crap.." I said and looked up and saw the sky going farther and farther away. "DAMMIT!" I yelled out just before i hit the ground. I looked up. Soome of the other Erasers began to gather around me. I closed my eyes. and when i opened them the White-coat was there with a smirk. "You cant run." He said and then walked away. The net was grabbed at the end and i was lifted over an eraser's shoulder and was being carried inside.
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countryangel · Posted: Fri Dec 30, 2005 2:18 pm Post subject:

yay, that was fantabulous!!!!!!! Very Happy

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GuidingWingz8857 · Posted: Fri Dec 30, 2005 3:05 pm Post subject:

YAY!! Just trying to keep it interesting.. i hope ur not mad that its late.. and chapta 8 is kinda short..>_<
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countryangel · Posted: Fri Dec 30, 2005 3:07 pm Post subject:

tis okay, and I'm not mad, i never get mad much, except for at my sisters, lol. and it's okay if it's short, cause it's still awesome!!!
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"its better to be hated for who you are, than be loved for who your not"-Van Zant

GuidingWingz8857 · Posted: Fri Dec 30, 2005 3:09 pm Post subject:

lol WOOHOO my story has a cheerleader!! lol!! j/k ... i saw that there is another Crash out there in the Fanfics.. ergg.....
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countryangel · Posted: Fri Dec 30, 2005 3:14 pm Post subject:

i saw that too, but don't worry.
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"its better to be hated for who you are, than be loved for who your not"-Van Zant