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livealittle
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PostPosted: Tue Dec 27, 2005 7:58 pm    Post subject: turning away Reply with quote

awesome more story, when you come back, please!!
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 29, 2005 2:22 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Oh, LaL! I love your siggy! I have that pic on my PB account! ^^
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SSB:*reaches up and headlocks her*
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SSB:*lets go and pushes wb out of the way before bomb goes off*
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 29, 2005 11:07 am    Post subject: going away Reply with quote

fangfan13190's going away?

(swears copiously)
(after regaining temper...)
that sucks
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 29, 2005 2:32 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

yeah, but she'll only be gone for a few days, i think.
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PostPosted: Sat Dec 31, 2005 6:22 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I want her to come back, its too quiet without her here.
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WB:*sits on SSB*
SSB:*reaches up and headlocks her*
DR1:*sets explosives on chair*
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4
3
2
1
0
BOOM!
SSB:*lets go and pushes wb out of the way before bomb goes off*
*ssb 'splodes shortly after*
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PostPosted: Mon Jan 02, 2006 12:14 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

lol? too quiet? oh really! here's a SUPER long post!

The day turned into night.
Fang sighed and looked out to door for Max.
Where was she?
Kodi went over to Fang and sat down, waiting for Fang to start.
“Where is she?” Fang whispered to himself.
Kodi raised an eyebrow.
“What?”
“Where is she?” he whispered, a little louder.
Kodi sighed.
“Uh, I don’t know, but I’m sure she’s fine.”
Fang sighed.
“I don’t know. She just doesn’t disappear…”
Kodi looked at Fang.
“Just don’t worry about it.”
“It’s kinda hard not to.”
Kodi sighed.
“I guess so. I wouldn’t know.”
“Uh, yeah,” Fang sighed, wanting him to leave.
“I’ll leave you alone.”
Fang nodded and watched Kodi get up and walk away.

Max smiled, watching it get dark.
She should probably go back.
Max got up, the deer shooting off.
After flying for a little, she reached the house.
Fang got up, going to Max instantly.
He hugged her to him, burying her head into his chest.
“Where were you?” he asked, rubbing her hair.
She sighed and looked up at him.
“I just had to get out, just for a little.”
Fang sighed and kissed her softly on her mouth.
Max smiled and kissed his cheek softly, then walked back outside.
“Hey where you going?” Fang asked, following her.
“Night flight,” she whispered, taking off into the air.
Fang grinned and followed her, shooting into the sky after her.

Iggy sat outside, listening to the quietness.
Leah watched him from the shadows.
“I can hear you, you know,” Iggy said softly.
“What?” Leah asked, amazed he could.
“I can hear you. Sharper senses, you know?”
Leah nodded and went over to him, sitting beside him.
Iggy smiled a little, wishing he could see her.
“Uh, peaceful, isn’t it?” Leah asked, her voice just above a whisper.
“Yeah, yeah, it is,” Iggy said, blushing a little.
Leah sat there, watching him for a minute.
“Hey, you okay?” Iggy asked.
“Oh, uh, yeah,” Leah said, flushing with embarrassment.
Iggy smiled and touched her cheek with his soft hands.
Leah let out a nervous laugh.
She was getting a little excited; maybe, just maybe, Iggy liked her.
Max looked behind her, to see Fang.
She dropped back, to get even with him.
“What’s going on Max?” he asked, taking his hand into hers.
“Nothing, I’m fine,” she said, looking away from him.
“Come on Max, I’m not blind. Come on, tell me.”
She sighed a little.
“Fang, I’m fine, perfectly fine.”
“Max, come on,” he said, starting to descend.
She flew down, beside him.
“Let’s land, then we can talk, okay.”
She sighed, but nodded.

Iggy leaned close to Leah.
She rested her head on his chest.
Iggy smiled, stroking her hair with his arm around her.
Leah looked up, still flushed with embarrassment.
“Are you okay?” Iggy asked, touching her cheek.
“Yeah, I’m fine,” she whispered.
Iggy leaned close to her, as if to kiss her.
Leah just stared at Iggy, not like he could tell.
Iggy leaned closer still and then pressed his lips gently to Leah’s.

Fang landed and then caught Max in his arms.
“Come on, let’s find somewhere to sit, okay?”
Max nodded, her head in Fang’s chest.
Fang picked her up and then sat under a tree, her in his lap.
He tilted her chin up, so she was looking at him.
“Come on Max, I know something is up.”
She sighed.
“No, I’m perfectly fine.”
“Oh, Max, come on. I’m not stupid. You never run off. There’s got to be something I can do.”
“It’s kinda, weird to say.”
Fang raised an eyebrow.
“Huh?” he asked.
“Uh,” Max said nervously blushing.
Fang sighed and looked at her.
“Come on Max, you can tell me anything.”
“It’s, uh, nothing,” she lied.
“Max, come on, don’t lie to me, please.”
“Fang, it’s kinda personal.”
Fang sighed.
“What do you mean by that?” he asked, clueless.
“Fang, please.”
He raised his eyebrow.
“Max, I’m confused.”
She sighed, getting a little mad.
“I’m having problems.”
“Problems?” he asked.
Max sighed and got up.
“Feminine problems, okay!” she yelled, getting touchy.
Fang drew back, finally realizing what was going on.
“Oh, oh,” he said, wondering what to do.
She sighed, walking away, very close to tears.
Fang got up.
“Hey wait up Max, we can solve this.”
“Newsflash Fang! It’s not just going to run away!” she shrieked, her tears falling.
Fang sighed, not sure what to do.
Max never, ever cried.
He watched her for a minute, just crying.
Finally he went to her, hugging her to him.
“Shhh, shhhh, it’s okay Max, I’m here.”
She continued to cry into his chest.
“No, it’s not okay.”
Fang smiled a little.
“It’s okay, you just cry, okay?”
She nodded and did just that.
Leah was baffled by Iggy’s kiss.
“Wow,” she managed to spit out.
Iggy smiled a little, blushing.
“What was that for?” Leah asked softly.
“That was for, well, uh,” he trailed off.
Leah blushed.
“That’s okay, it was nice.”
“Really?” he asked.
Leah smiled.
“Yes, yes it was,” she said dreamily.
Iggy smiled a little, his arm still wrapped around her.
Leah snuggled a little closer to Iggy, really happy.

Max sighed, finally stopping her tears.
Fang smiled a little, brushing her hair out of her eyes.
“Thanks Fang,” she sighed again.
Fang’s smiled widened.
“It’s perfectly okay. Remember, I’m here for you Max.”
She nodded.
“I know…”
Fang kissed her softly.
“Can you fly?”
Max sighed, her stomach cramped.
“Uh, yeah, my stomach just hurts…”
Fang smiled and then picked her up.
“Oh, course. I’ll carry you then.”
Max sighed and forced a smile.
“You don’t have to.”
Fang kissed her cheek softly.
Max blushed a little.
“I do have to.”
She sighed, admitting her defeat.
“Okay Romeo, carry me away,” she said, stifling a laugh.
Fang laughed, kissed her quickly, and then shot into the air.
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PostPosted: Mon Jan 02, 2006 5:15 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

awwwwwwwwww how cute!!
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PostPosted: Thu Jan 05, 2006 6:00 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Fang carried Max back inside.
“Where do you want to go?” he asked her softly.
She sighed, holding her stomach.
“Still hurt huh?” he asked, concerned.
She nodded.
“You don’t know, you never will.”
Fang sighed.
“I know, don’t worry, I won’t press you.”
Max sighed as well.
“You best not,” she said, a little crossly.
Fang smiled a little and put her on the couch.
He sat beside her.
Max looked up at him, before burying her head into him.
Fang stroked her hair, in a comforting way.
“Go on, get some rest.”
She nodded and was asleep.

Iggy stroked Leah’s hair softly.
Her breathing lightened, and she was asleep soon after.
Iggy listened to her breathing.
It had a soothing effect on him.
He smiled, getting sleepy as well.
He kissed her cheek softly, waking her.
“Come on,” he said, his voice barely a whisper.
“Let’s go inside.”
Leah rubbed her eyes.
“Huh? Oh yeah, inside,” she said.
She got up and then grabbed Iggy’s hand, pulling him up as well.
Iggy smiled, blushing a little.
Leah got up on her tiptoes and kissed Iggy’s cheek.
She kept his hand in hers and then led him inside.
Fang still held the sleeping Max.
His eyes jerked open, hearing Iggy and Leah.
“Oh, Ig, it’s just you.”
Iggy nodded and grinned a little.
Leah shifted on her feet.
“I’m gonna go on to bed. Night.”
Iggy blushed a little.
“Night Leah.”
Leah walked out.
Fang grinned at Iggy.
“So what’s up Iggy?”
Iggy sat down in a chair, still blushing.
“Uh, nothing,” he lied.
“Hey Ig, newsflash, I’m not stupid…come on, spill.”
Iggy sighed, knowing he couldn’t keep what had just happened to himself.
“Okay fine, I’ll tell.”

Iggy sighed, wondering where to start.
This was going to be weird to tell, especially Fang.
“Come on, Ig, I can keep a secret.”
“It’s not that, it’s just hard to say, you know?”
“Can I guess?” Fang asked with a grin.
Iggy nodded.
“Okay, I’m gonna guess that you and Leah finally made your moves.”
Iggy’s face reddened.
“And that you kissed?”
Iggy nodded.
“How’d you know?” he asked.
Fang grinned a little.
“Well for one thing, you’re really red faced. That gives something away.”
Iggy blushed ever more.
“Yeah, I guess.”
“And every time I mention her, you fidget.”
Iggy sighed.
“Didn’t know I was that obvious.”
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PostPosted: Thu Jan 05, 2006 8:16 pm    Post subject: turning away Reply with quote

awesome more please!!
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PostPosted: Thu Jan 05, 2006 8:28 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

fantabulous and cute!!! More!!
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PostPosted: Thu Jan 05, 2006 8:29 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

lol! i gave you guys lots! hehehe!
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PostPosted: Thu Jan 05, 2006 8:32 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

yes you did!! and we are most grateful!!!
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PostPosted: Thu Jan 05, 2006 8:34 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

lol! okay!
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 06, 2006 12:08 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

So awsome. That was something that I totally missed with the site down.

I want more. Please.
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 06, 2006 12:42 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

eekers! however can icatch up?!?
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