Dark Secrets

IHateAngels · Posted: Wed Dec 28, 2005 6:04 pm Post subject: Dark Secrets

Ok after some good feedback on this prologue, I'm working on making this into a story. Please read and comment, thanks! Oh and does anyone know how to get rid of this poll? I don't need it anymore so you can ignore it.

Angelic Discovery

Damion panted as he laboured up the wire fence. It was a warm night, he was wearing heavy black clothing and he could really do without having to climb over this fence. But if he wanted to join the gang then he had to, Chris had told him. They wouldn't let him in otherwise and he needed to be in that gang!

Damion was a small, scrawny, pale skinned 14 year old boy, all bones and skin and no muscle. He normally wore a basic T-Shirt and jeans with trainers and glasses but for tonight he had exchanged them for a black bomber jacket, plain black shirt, black tracksuit trousers and plimsolls. He'd wondered about the plimsolls but they were the best shoes for this kind of thing. The silvery moonlight glinted off the fringe of pale blond hair that came out from under the baseball cap on his head and the light was reflected in his deep blue eyes. His narrow lips and nose were set in a grimace of pain and determination. Ahead of him, beyond this damn fence was his objective, the old lab. No-one knew what they did in there and it normally looked deserted but there were still guards who patrolled with vicious dogs. But he had to get into that flat squat building and get out again with proof. Then he would be a member. He wouldn't be picked on at the local Beaumont High School and no-one would ever dare call him four eyes again! Emboldened by that thought he finally managed to heave himself to the top of the fence, his hands tightly gripping the wire. He let out a curse as his right palm scratched against a loose strand of wire and he licked the blood away.

As he waited for the pain to ebb away he thought again about whether this was such a good idea. When he'd asked to join Chris's gang he hadn't really thought about what he'd have to do when inside. All he'd thought about was the fact that Charlotte, the girl he loved most in the world was already in it and he had to impress her! If that meant breaking and entering he'd thought so be it. That was fine when he was thinking about it in the comfort of his own bedroom but caught on the top of a wire fence, about to enter a very sinister lab with some very unfriendly men who would be very impolite if they found him here it wasn't quite that easy. Then he heard a hiss from the bushes behind him.
"Get on with it!" That was Chris's voice. The entire gang was around the area to check he did it. That was all the encouragement Damion needed and he mustered his strength and swung from the tip of his fingers down to the ground on the other side. For a few seconds he dangled a few feet above the ground then he let go and dropped in an untidy heap. Swearing, he scrambled to his knees and wiped his sweaty brow with a grimy hand.

Then he heard the guards. Two of them with their dogs approaching the fence as they rounded the far corner of the lab and came down the side. Damion quickly dropped to the floor again and huddled up against fence caught in the open, as he tried to minimize his bulk. One of the guards was speaking forcefully to the other.
"I swear I heard something over here! Someone scrambling over the fence!" The guard's voice was high pitched and whining. The second guard was clearly unconvinced.
"What like your intruder last time Igor? You're as jumpy as a rat" His voice was mocking.

The footsteps came closer as the guards walked along the wall until it sounded like they were right on top of him.
"Wait a minute the dogs have something..." murmured the one who hadn't believed Igor.
"See? There's something here, go get em boys!"
Damion trembled and buried his face in his chest and prepared to be captured....

But no bite came, no shout of alarm. No rough demands about why he was here. Damion listened closely...it sounded as if the dogs had ran right past him to a point along the wall much further down.
"Looks like they're digging something up" said the high pitched man, Igor.
Then Damion heard the guards move over to to where the dogs were busy digging up whatever it was.
"Do you know what we've found?" gasped the disbelieving guard accompanying Igor, "it's one of the Experiments!"
"But...but...that was five years ago! They disappeared! We need to report this to the Director!"
Damion heard the men run past him and rounded the corner of the building, shouting as they went. He stood up, shivering and looked down in disgust. He'd soiled himself in terror. He knew the important thing to do right now was run and get away. But something compelled him to move closer to the building and look at what had affected the guards so badly. As he approached it, every nerve in his body screaming to get out of here while he still could his eyes widened in shock. His entire body froze up and his blood seemed to run cold as he stared down at the discovery.

Then he ran desperately for the gate, making no attempt to be quiet. He lost all semblance of control as he leapt at the fence and with a strength born of terror hauled himself over the fence and on to the ground on the other side. He tore for the treeline, past the astonished gang members hiding in the bushes.

Behind him, the skeleton with wings shone in the moonlight, it's macabre grin bared to the sky.
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So what do you think?
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thiylan_kizuba747 · Posted: Wed Dec 28, 2005 6:08 pm Post subject:

tis very good. continue.
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hawkeyes1 · Posted: Wed Dec 28, 2005 6:16 pm Post subject:

LOVE IT!!! Very Happy

And welcome to the flock, IHateAngels. Is it ok if we call you IHA or HA?? Wink

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thiylan_kizuba747 · Posted: Wed Dec 28, 2005 7:15 pm Post subject:

i like HA
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i love G_A!!!
It's thanksgiving time
time for jello
I like your new blazer
the sleeves are pushed up
it looks pretty awesome

hawkeyes1 · Posted: Wed Dec 28, 2005 7:21 pm Post subject:

your nickname has been officially been accepted. lol
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IHateAngels · Posted: Thu Dec 29, 2005 3:40 am Post subject:

Thanks guys I'll see what i can do about continuing it into a full story. HA is fine, thanks for the welcome.
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IHateAngels · Posted: Thu Dec 29, 2005 6:47 am Post subject:

Chapter 1: The Hunt

The Director swivelled in his leather chair as he looked intently at the two guards faces. The guards looked at each other nervously. They were in the Director's office. It was a stark, bare room lit with white light with no decoration, no colour, no soul. Even the furniture was limited to the chair and one massive desk. The Director was the absolute power at the facility and no-one ever crossed him.
"So you say it was one of the....Experiments?" the Director asked, his voice light and emotionless.
"Y-yes Director, one of the Ang-"
"Don't ever say the name of that wretched Experiment!" interrupted the Director harshly, his hands slamming on the oak of the desk in front of him. The two guards flinched in the face of his fury and looked down at their feet, muttering hasty apologies.
"Very well then. It was just a skeleton? Nothing else?"
"Nothing sir"
"And no-one saw it?"
"There was no-one there sir! We were as alert as can be and saw nothing"
"Then there's no trouble is there? Go put the skeleton in the incinerator, now!"

"Yes Director!" stammered the two men and they practically tripped over themselves in their hurry to leave. The Director put the tips of his fingers against his brow as he thought. Then he walked out and down to the security room, where all the remote security features, such as the cameras and alarms, were controlled from. He crossed to a bank of TV screens which showed different parts of the compound and he found the one that showed the area the guards had been patrolling. Rewinding the security recording he watched the two guards walk round the corner, the dogs find the skeleton and the guards rushing off to find him. Just before the moment the guards ran away he paused the video and tapped the screen thoughtfully. Where his finger rested was a certain part of the fence and just in front of it, bathed in the infra-red light....a huddled shape wearing all black, hunched against the wall. The Director's eyes betrayed no emotion as he pulled a mobile phone from his pocket and quickly dialled a number.

"Julie have Igor and Tomas finished incinerating that skeleton?" he listened to the squawking answer.
"No? Well when they have can you please throw them in the pits? The meat beasts haven't fed for a little while. Then please make it quite clear I don't tolerate incompetence to the rest of the staff? Thank you. Oh and get the meat beasts to sniff around the fence will you? If they catch a scent, let them loose and follow it. Excellent." The Director returned the phone to his pocket and strode back to his office. The incompetent guards would soon be dead and so would their mystery intruder. Everything was in order.
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cool · Posted: Thu Dec 29, 2005 7:23 am Post subject:

pretty good and ha u into rp's
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IHateAngels · Posted: Thu Dec 29, 2005 8:06 am Post subject:

Thanks. Never really tried them to be honest.
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cool · Posted: Thu Dec 29, 2005 8:21 am Post subject:

u would be good at setting lines
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hawkeyes1 · Posted: Thu Dec 29, 2005 8:57 am Post subject:

MORE!!! love it!! Very Happy

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Grave_Heart · Member of the Flock Joined: 04 Dec 2005 Posts: 109

This story is the best. So creative. Whats going to happen next. Twisted Evil

I need to know. Twisted Evil

NOW NOW NOW Twisted Evil

hawkeyes1 · Posted: Thu Dec 29, 2005 9:37 am Post subject:

yes!!! more!!!
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-kelly clarkson

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hawkeyes1 · Posted: Thu Dec 29, 2005 9:38 am Post subject:

yes!!! more!!!
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"I'll spread my wings and ill learn how to fly; I'll do what it takes until I touch the sky..."
-kelly clarkson

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hawkeyes1 · Posted: Thu Dec 29, 2005 9:38 am Post subject:

yes!!! more!!!
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"I'll spread my wings and ill learn how to fly; I'll do what it takes until I touch the sky..."
-kelly clarkson

"Normal" countryangel's, indigo's, winged victory's, and my ff