Fortune/Unfortune

Mr.Man · Posted: Thu Sep 15, 2005 8:09 pm Post subject: Fortune/Unfortune

My new FF!!!! Enjoy Chapter one!!!

Chapter One

He awoke in his cage of horror to the sounds of his fellow experiments moaning. ‘They must have just come back from testing rooms…’ he thought to himself. ’They’re going to be comin’ for my cage any minute…’ the two hideous Erasers waltzed up to him in such a gleeful manner he was already sickened by them before they spoke. He wished Teddy was there to retrieve him instead of these to low-life goons.
“Hi there little fella.” Spoke one as he leaned over sideways to peer into the cage.
“Its ok little guy… were not going to hurt you…” Spoke the other as he lowered his face to the bars as he unlocked the doggy crate.
“BS” he spoke firmly with power.
“No, were not kidding… Ya see… WE’RE not going to hurt you. The ‘dreaded white coats’ are…” He put too much emphasis on the, ’we’re, and put the sad girly sounds to the ‘Dreaded white coats’. It could creep out even the toughest varsity football player.
He was dragged to a relatively large room and told to ‘avoid danger’ as best he could. The young Erasers were released from their cages to sick their prey which to his unfortune had been in the same procedures everyday with Erasers. The Erasers understood now if they tried to overtake their victim by just charging they would lose the advance and be put on the defensive. They circled the poor boy; now, the boys had not the fortune of the Erasers performing in group operations. So unknown what to expect he was ambushed by one side as a distraction while the rest took his tuned back. Blow after blow came as well as the sharp claws and—

“Magic! Get of me!” I sat up in bed, sweating his head off from the nightmare.
“Bloody cat… why does she need to stab me in the middle of the night with her claws…”
I logged on to my computer and signed right onto the Maximum Ride Forum. My discovery of the Maximum Ride books By James Patterson led me to join the forum and enjoy the wonderful people there. I posted on the RP’s for a while and then started a topic on the General Discussion: Assorted Topics. “I had this really weird nightmare….” And I wrote on and on about what happened. It’s like I was really there… Sort of like a premonition…*bring!!!* A little window appeared on my screen. A personal message. I opened it not even realizing how it was about to change my insignificant life.

“Hey there Mr.Man!!! My name is Teddy and I thought I’d bother you as you seem to like to help people. See, I’m a little new here and I thought yo could show me around so to speak…” the message went on and on.

It didn’t take long for me to become friends with Teddy. He was a really nice kid. He understood anything I told him. He lived somewhere in Colorado and we hope some day years down the road to meet. I kept up to par with the forum and I got to see everything that went on there. As was my job I helped the newbie’s in adjusting to the site and I kept spirits high. Teddy had grown fond of the site and became well liked in the site. One day I go the news of my life.

“Hey Man!!! Guess what! My dad has a business trip to where your at and he told me I could come along so I could meet you in person!!!”

It was too good to be true. My good friend coming to California to see me! I told him my excitement and he told me to meet him at my local community center and I gave him the directions to get there.

I sat at the bench with my cell phone and ipod mini waiting for him to arrive. He told me he was going to be arriving in a white van his dad’s company uses. However he neglected to tell me who his dad worked for so I had a very rough time every time a white van went by and it didn’t stop. After the 20th or so van and after 20 instant adrenaline rushes a white van stopped at the curb. My heart did a back flip in anticipation to meet him face to face. Out walked a tall boy a little taller than me with black hair, brown eyes, and standing at around 6’.
“Hey, are you William?”
“And you must be Teddy?”
“Wow! Its so nice to meet you in person…”
“Indeed, I’ve waited a very long time to meet you.”
“Likewise… Er… William?”
“Yes.”
“I have a little confession to make…”
“Huh? What do you mean?”
“You see, my ‘dad’ wanted to meet you long ago… I tried to leave you messages in code so you would understand to forget me but you didn’t…”
“Teddy?... What are you saying?...”
“I- I’m a recruiter… I’m sorry William…”
“A recruiter for what? I don’t understand…”
“Maximum Ride. I go make accounts and log on to make good friends with people to abduct from the site to use in The School.”
“What?”
“William, the book Maximum Ride is real. There really is a School. And I’m sorry… your on the ‘Scholarship’ list…”
“So…”
“Yea. The more I got to talk to you the more I really started to like you as a friend. I tried to save you from this but it didn’t work… I’m really sorry to do this to you William…” He pulled out a hypodermic needle out and injected me with some clear fluid. I felt all woozy and I could still here Teddy saying, ‘I’m so sorry, William’, as darkness consumed me…

-Mr.Man
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FlyingStar1416 · Posted: Thu Sep 15, 2005 8:13 pm Post subject:

I like it!
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Mr.Man · Posted: Thu Sep 15, 2005 8:31 pm Post subject:

Thank you very much!!! And no that is not my name...

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Mr.Man · Posted: Thu Sep 15, 2005 10:39 pm Post subject:

Hello.... Anybody likey?... Ya already know the way to make me post more chapters is to give support to the writer... Common... you all wanted me to write a new story so badly and hardly anyones said 'boo' about this one... Does that mean its no good?

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~Fang_Rocks~ · Tested & Nested Joined: 05 Sep 2005 Posts: 972

it's going good please write some more.
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FlyingStar1416 · Posted: Thu Sep 15, 2005 11:56 pm Post subject:

No, it just means that no 1 is on at the moment.

Give them time, they will come!
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If I get up I might fall back down again
But we get up anyway
But we just jump and see even if it's the 40th time
We'll just jump and see if we can fly...
-Superchic[k]

Mr.Man · Posted: Fri Sep 16, 2005 12:07 am Post subject:

*props up head on hand like a bored student in class* Yea I know there is no one on... I'm just being inpationt today... ^^ I'm gonna start snoozing soon so hopefully I'll get some of my FF groupies (I'm coining a term to call people who regularly vist specific FF's) to stop by. ^^ I hope I do not offend anyone by using that term.

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arya ride · Tested & Nested Joined: 12 Jul 2005 Posts: 1213

omg! you finally put up another FF! i would've posted sooner, but i was on an 18th century style camping trip with school, so i obviously couldn't use a computer there...
anyway, POST MORE POST MORE POST MORE POST MORE!
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Mr.Man · Posted: Sat Sep 17, 2005 6:48 pm Post subject:

THANK GOD SOMEONE REPLIES!!! I was thinking about quitting... Rolling Eyes

-Mr.Man
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FlyingStar1416 · Posted: Sat Sep 17, 2005 6:50 pm Post subject:

Never quit!! There is almost always some1 on, but they just might read slow, so no worries!!
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If I get up I might fall back down again
But we get up anyway
But we just jump and see even if it's the 40th time
We'll just jump and see if we can fly...
-Superchic[k]

Angel of Death · Posted: Sat Sep 17, 2005 6:58 pm Post subject:

*applauds Mr Man* I likee! I likee much!
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FlyingStar1416 · Posted: Sat Sep 17, 2005 7:02 pm Post subject:

See, people do come!!
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If I get up I might fall back down again
But we get up anyway
But we just jump and see even if it's the 40th time
We'll just jump and see if we can fly...
-Superchic[k]

Mr.Man · Posted: Sun Sep 18, 2005 10:21 am Post subject:

*Sighs* yay... I write some more when I have the time. I'm half awake because I went to the Kihncert (local anual concert for radio channel 98.5 KFOX) And saw three legends of Rock and Roll. Gre Khin (he was popular in the 80's) George Thorogood (Bad to the Bone), and The Steve Miller Band (Fly Like An Eagle, Abracadabra, Go On Take The Money And Run)

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FlyingStar1416 · Posted: Sun Sep 18, 2005 3:41 pm Post subject:

Cool!
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If I get up I might fall back down again
But we get up anyway
But we just jump and see even if it's the 40th time
We'll just jump and see if we can fly...
-Superchic[k]

Mr.Man · Posted: Sun Sep 18, 2005 3:42 pm Post subject:

It was very cool. But the drug use there was not. *pukes*

-Mr.Man
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