Dr. Martin Luther King, Jr.

Blogs by 4th graders in Ms. Tonello’s class

Please click on a few links below, read the blogs carefully, and make constructive comments to help improve the author’s writing. Think about the following points as you make your suggestions:

Does the author stay on topic?  (Dr. Martin Luther King, Jr. and his ideas)

Does the author use correct capitalization, punctuation, grammar, and spelling?  

Does the author use an interesting writing style (details, descriptive words, variety)?

Does the author have a hook (attention-grabbing introduction) and a conclusion?

Dylan http://instablogg.com/jJL8rrT

Amar http://instablogg.com/vYrHRJp

Alexandra http://instablogg.com/Veh2c52

Eleissa http://instablogg.com/ee8XaZO

Abigail http://instablogg.com/AD38v8H

LeeAnna http://instablogg.com/23p9Dd6

Michael http://instablogg.com/pZISUWZ

Zahaid http://instablogg.com/I5QmpT5

Ramel http://instablogg.com/O6j52-I

Yoni http://instablogg.com/DzAFuJa

Cayla http://instablogg.com/nd7.mAX

Joseph http://instablogg.com/LFjkIHG

Marcos http://instablogg.com/08_gXAT

Kiana http://instablogg.com/wx8pMw9

Taliyah http://instablogg.com/.IFu_Le

Chaniya http://instablogg.com/cAUn7.Y