***Note: I received a free copy of this eBook, in exchange for an honest review***
Let me introduce you to Jill Prand, a new indie author, who just published her first book, Watch Me Walk Away (Walking Series), earlier this month. Once I read the synopsis of the book, it seemed like just the kind of book I could get lost in. I seem to navigate easily to the books that involve long triangles. Although I am not sure why, because most of the time I am screaming at the main character to make a dang decision already!!!
So here it the synopsis of the story:
At the age of seventeen, Lisa was broken when Bobby left. He was suppose to be her first. First Love. First Time. First Everything. No word for six long years. She moved away from the painful reminders sacrificing her relationship with her best friend Brad. She struggled to rebuild her life.
Now six years later she returns as a strong, successful woman grabbing a job at one of New York’s hottest marketing agencies. She is dating a gorgeous guy with his eyes on a corner office. But it all changes when she sees Bobby again.
Can she risk another heartbreak from Bobby? Will she be able to repair her friendship with Brad? Lisa will have to decide between the man she's with, and the two men that want her.
Who will she be with, and who will she tell to "Watch Me Walk Away?"
So what did I like about the book:
1. I really enjoyed the story line. As I mentioned, I tend to enjoy burying myself into a good love triangle. For me, a love triangle is very relatable. I don’t know many women who made it through their dating years without finding themselves in the middle of one…I know I did. It always seemed like the one person I really wanted was not interested or available at the time…..that is until I moved on and started seeing/falling for someone else. Guess it goes back to that old cliché…..always wanting what you can’t have.
2. I enjoyed the characters. What I love about Lisa is that I am not screaming at her, through my Kindle. She was not as indecisive as many of the women you find at the heart of the love triangles we love to read about. I can appreciate her feelings and the situation she finds herself in when she finally starts dating and is about to dive in when Bobby re-enters her life. I can empathize with her desire to want to protect Stuart’s feelings, and love that her feelings and bond with Bobby overpowers her fears. He let her down once before….that will likely always be in the back of her mind. Stuart is a jerk! I understand his frustration and his foregone conclusions, but the prick was out of line....with his actions and his words. I love Brad. I Iove that he and Lisa need each other so much, yet what they want is not the same. I so hope that he gets his happily ever after. I really love Bobby. Yeah, he made some mistakes…..his heart is in the right place but he needs some help with execution when it comes the plans he develops in his heart and mind.
So, what keeps my review from reaching a solid four stars?
1. At first, I felt like this one started off a little slow for me. Then again, most of the books I have been reading seem to kick off full blast, making them seem less ‘real’. As I continued to read on, I realized that maybe it was not a slow starter, but maybe provided too many of the little details. I started feeling like it was more about word count, rather than pertinent storyline information. For example, do I need to know the order in which 5 people enter a cab and in what position they sit?
2. Something was missing for me…..I wanted more….more drama and angst. Take Stuart and Bobby for instance. Who witnesses a man put his hands on a woman that way, knowing bruises will form and does nothing physically about it. I wanted Bobby to pull Stuart to a back alley and teach him a lesson. Take Bobby and Lisa….I understand the connection, the love, the relationship…and it’s not that I wanted either to suffer, but I needed more “something” before their reunion. In my opinion, that process could have had more development…more build-up, more intensity before their reunion blew up the pages.....
3. I promise that I read for content….I am not one who reads through text looking for errors, but I do seem to find them. I guess I am one of those who really focus on the details and needs the correct details to obtain the full effect of the words on the pages. I have read so many books that, lately, have been full of grammatical and punctuation errors. I am not a professional proofreader and/or editor, but I do pick up on things When I notice errors, I immediately think of those who may have reading disabilities and how they may struggle getting through the content when punctuation is missing or used incorrectly, or when there are words missing or incorrect words used. These errors and/or omissions can really alter the meaning and translation as the words on the paper come to life. That being said, I acknowledge how hard it must be to proofread your own novel - I have a hard enough time proofing my own reviews....I am on edit #9 and found another error I made :)
All in all – I give the book 3.5 stars. It was a solid debut. Again, I enjoyed the storyline and the characters and look forward to learning more about them. I was glad to see that this book appears to be the beginning of a series. I am eager to learn where Lisa and Bobby go from here. Is their love strong enough to last? What happens with Brad? Does he stay in town or head out to forget the love he will never have and try to find some ‘happily ever after’ of his own. Also, surely there is more to come from Stuart. Now that he has shown his true colors, there will surely be more stupid moves on his part. I don’t think he’ll be giving up so easily. I will continue to read and grow with Jill Prand, as her new writing career develops and expands.