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Murder Off the Books (Sullivan Investigations Mysteries, No. 1) Paperback – March 1, 2007
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- Print length288 pages
- LanguageEnglish
- PublisherEchelon Press Publishing
- Publication dateMarch 1, 2007
- Dimensions5.91 x 0.59 x 8.03 inches
- ISBN-101590805224
- ISBN-13978-1590805220
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"Evelyn David's quirky sense of humor sparkles on every page. Murder Off The Books is a clever, witty romp with plenty of twists and surprises. A laudable debut." --Kathryn R. Wall, author, Bishop's Reach
"A fast-paced mystery with a lively and indomitable heroine, a tough-guy hero, and a lovable dog." --JoAnna Carl, author of The Chocolate Bridal Bash
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Friday Night
The pop of a human head cracking against rock sounded surprisingly loud. As the man fell against the wall of the clock tower, the killer unscrewed the silencer from the gun, musing about the number of details involved in planning and executing a perfect murder. And this was certainly not a perfect murder. Several loose ends were going to need tying. Next time a list might come in handy.
Sunday Night
Murder victims shouldn't have to wait. Discount store shoppers, people with broken dental crowns, drivers in the middle of rush hour. Those people deserved to wait. Expected to wait. But not...
She was tired of being last on everyone's 'to do' list.
Ten minutes. Way too long to be hiding in a closet. Way too long to be in the dark.
She really couldn't stand cowering in the dark. If she had to cower, she'd do it in the light-just like always.
She clicked on the flashlight she'd grabbed in her frantic dash from the bed to the walk-in closet.
Much better.
The light was comforting. The light was... The light was... risky.
She hastily clicked off the beam and disappeared back into the shadows.
She left the closet door ajar. Like everything else in her life-slightly warped. Once fully closed, it couldn't be opened from the inside. She'd be stuck in there until...until what? Who'd rescue her?
She wished again that she hadn't left her cordless phone downstairs.
Run. She wasn't going to be able to run.
Her right foot tingled-numb.
Rachel Brenner shifted, stretching out one bare leg, quietly trying to move her foot, thinking that at some point she might need to slip down into the living room and search for her second cordless phone, the one that fit into the charger on the kitchen wall and had been missing for a couple of days. She'd probably find it under the sofa or between the cushions. That's where she'd look first-if she had time.
"Enough," she whispered. "Concentrate on something besides the damn phones."
Dust. The closet floor was cramped-and dusty. Stifling a sneeze, she decided she had some serious cleaning to do if she survived. If she didn't, well it would be someone else's problem.
She wiggled her toes until the feeling returned and then rose to her feet intending to open the closet door and listen.
Two steps. Her heart pounded so loud that she couldn't think, much less hear.
Looking around, she grabbed a twenty-year-old trench coat that had belonged to her ex-husband and rolled it into a ball. She pressed the material against her chest to muffle the sound.
Stupid. No one else could hear her heart. No one else could hear her. The coat's owner hadn't.
Thoughts of Charlie cleared the noise from her head.
She peeked through the crack in the door. And listened.
Nothing but the furnace and the sound of her own ragged breathing.
She held her breath and opened the door a little wider.
Nothing. She didn't hear...
No. She heard it again. Something...just...there. A shuffling sound-still downstairs.
Rachel carefully closed the closet door again and returned to her spot on the floor, this time sitting on the bunched trench coat, instead of hiding behind it.
She hugged her knees to her chest and stared at the bits and pieces surrounding her and wondered what would happen to all of her things when she was gone.
Sam would be the one to have to deal with selling or giving away her lifetime accumulation of clothes, costume jewelry, and mis-matched china and silverware. Oh, he'd probably keep a few things. He might want some of the old family photographs she'd organized into albums. Thank goodness she'd gotten them labeled last year during one long, miserable night right after her divorce was final. At least Sam would be able to tell his children about her side of the family and put the correct name to the face.
Her brother wouldn't be of much help. Dan had his own problems. He was settling into a new job and a new life. She sighed and stretched out her legs. Rachel nudged a shadow in the corner with her toe. A well-used hockey stick-another remnant of her ex-husband, something from his glory days.
She flicked on the flashlight again and played the wavering beam over the clothes, empty suitcases, and shoes. God, she had too many shoes. She glanced at the row upon row of neatly labeled shoeboxes lining the shelf above the clothes rod, and the additional stacks on the carpeted floor beneath. Setting down the flashlight, she picked up a nearby box and peeked inside.
Beautiful black leather pumps, $89 on sale. Never worn. She glanced in another box. All purchased within the last two years and she'd never worn any of them. Her well-worn favorites were in a heap by her bed: Nikes, Reeboks, high-topped, brightly colored basketball shoes. The pumps, well, they were mostly just...
Rachel set down the box. They were a mistake. They were her way of trying to be more like the women Charlie Brenner had been screwing the last three years of their marriage. She frowned and put the lid back on the box. Like the woman Charlie currently lived with now. Tina of perky breasts and four-inch heels.
Tina would love all those shoes. Charlie would probably give them to her too, Rachel realized. Help Sam by taking them off his hands. Her shoes on Tina's feet. No way.
The spurt of anger and the loud sound of a closing door gave her the courage to act.
Rachel got up and grabbed a pair of sweat pants off a hanger and pulled them on. Picking up the hockey stick, she stalked out of the closet.
Tina could buy her own damn shoes.
Product details
- Publisher : Echelon Press Publishing
- Publication date : March 1, 2007
- Edition : 1st
- Language : English
- Print length : 288 pages
- ISBN-10 : 1590805224
- ISBN-13 : 978-1590805220
- Item Weight : 12 ounces
- Dimensions : 5.91 x 0.59 x 8.03 inches
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Evelyn David is the pseudonym for Marian Edelman Borden and Rhonda Dossett. Marian lives in New York and is the author of ten nonfiction books on a wide variety of topics ranging from veterans benefits to playgroups for toddlers! Rhonda lives in Oklahoma, is the coal program director for the state, and in her spare time enjoys imagining and writing funny, scary mysteries. Marian and Rhonda write their mystery series via the internet. While many fans who attend mystery conventions have now chatted with both halves of Evelyn David, Marian and Rhonda have yet to meet in person.
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Customers find the book to be a great read, with one describing it as a delightfully written solid mystery novel.
"...fresh eyes, I can honestly say that this re-read is still a five star debut novel. What a delightfully written solid mystery novel...." Read more
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"...adventure through Washington, D.C. will have you laughing, amazed at the twists and turns, caught up in the chases, stake-outs, kidnappings, and more..." Read more
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- Reviewed in the United States on April 30, 2013I first read this excellent novel in 2007 but at that time never wrote up my opinions. Now, with fresh eyes, I can honestly say that this re-read is still a five star debut novel. What a delightfully written solid mystery novel. The Authors asked me if I had read it...'Yes' with pleasure.
We have a recently licensed Private Investigator, Maczenzie Sullivan, his trusty partner, Irish Wolfhound, Whiskey as they are fully involved in a stake-out. The coincidences begin. The person being staked-out is the new office manager of Mac's best buddy, Jeff who owns a funeral parlor business. Why is this person being staked out? Because, there is a cool half a million dollars missing from the college, a man is dead, and the insurance company wants their money safe!
Does that sound direct enough? Well, its not as you quickly find out, while laughing aloud, bodies are flying, vehicles are inter-changed, crazed exterminators are out to eradicate, and even kitties are involved. The suspect, you ask? Why, the suspect, is fully championed by his family and friends. In fact that is part of the problem.
This rollicking adventure through Washington, D.C. will have you laughing, amazed at the twists and turns, caught up in the chases, stake-outs, kidnappings, and more. The deaths will startle you, yet this novel can be enjoyed by both cozy murder mystery lovers as well as more edgier fans of the genre.
This novel is available in all formats, so please give it a read, or re-read.
- Reviewed in the United States on November 15, 2009There are many descriptions of the plot, so I'll just issue a small warning.
This book would appear to be a "cozy" with the cover featuring a cute dog, but it's a deception. The body count is too high, there's too much violence, even some police brutality. The dog, who is the best part of the book, has an incident of being treated violently.
I would classify it as more of a serial killer thriller, because until the very end, there seems to be no rhyme or reason as to why some of the victims are killed and because the armchair detective is never given enough information to come close to figuring out who might have "done it."
I regret buying the book - should have tried the library first, or waited for it to come on the used market.
- Reviewed in the United States on March 1, 2007Murder Off the Books is a great read! Suspense and humor are doled out equally. Private detective Mac Sullivan is a former cop-turned-private-eye, and his recurring appearances at his pal's funeral home to pick up whatever vehicle is available means that he conducts stake-outs with his Irish Wolfhound in anything from a hearse to an exterminator's truck. Pet lovers will respond to Whiskey, who helps as only dogs can, and I personally hope we'll hear more from JJ, Mac's initially-unwanted gal Friday. An expanded role for her in future books of the series would be great--she's fun and likable--and delightfully off-beat.
- Reviewed in the United States on September 24, 2007The book was pretty good for a first offering but the continued use of characters' physical descriptions rather than their names got to be very irritating...'the teen turned' 'he told the teen' 'the private detective said' ''the lanky teen' and so on and so on and so on. It was almost as if the author(s) forgot the names they had given their characters. Maybe this was just poor editing but in anycase it took away from my enjoyment and nearly caused me to give up on the book....More importantly, maybe I fell asleep and missed the clues leading to the eventual guilty party but I don't think so. All of a sudden....bad guy without any warning. But because the characters were originally conceived I will give any second offering a chance. Just PLEASE use your characters' names!
- Reviewed in the United States on March 18, 2007Murder Off the Books has found a way to grab most of us: humor, a well-written whodunit with wonderful, zany characters--and a dog who hates cats and a cat that hates dogs. What's not to like?
Just when you thnk you've figured it out, this talented author throws in another twist, another turn. Actually Evelyn David is the writing name for two talented writers working together. (Check out the author's Web site to see whom the two authors are).
Mac Sullivan is a retired DC cop who is now setting up his own detective agency. His dog sidekick is an Irish Wolfhound named Whiskey. He's Mac's buddy, his confidant--you get it.
Rachel Brenner is a cat lover who is recently divorced mother of a teen-age son. Her cat helps her through her mid-life crisis, like having to take her skills to work at a funeral home.
P.I. Mac is staking out Rachel's house and following her to work, because her brother (who may or may not be guilty) of murdering his boss.
The fun begins quickly n this zany and fast-paced mystery. P.I. Mac has his new job, Rachel in her job, both starting over to some degree, both learning to copy with the changes.
Of course Mac is good looking--so there's a little romance thrown in for good measure.
I hope this is the first in a long line of Sullivan Investigations Mysteries--and that the next one is ready so I don't have to wait so long to read more about these wonderful characters.
Armchair Interviews says: Great first book from this duo of gifted writers.
- Reviewed in the United States on February 27, 2007If you're looking for an off-the-beaten-track whodunit featuring a retired gumshoe with the slang and wit of a Runyonesque character and the companionship of a Hootch-like pooch (sans Tom Hanks) - this is a great read! It's an off-the-wall, fast-talking, faster-moving, unpredictable action tale with babes, bodies, and burglars - and a storyline that takes more twists and turns than an Irish Wolfhound on the tail of a rabbit - or a murderer. Mark my word! This is the first of a rack full of successful Sullivan Investigations Mysteries.